I do like these sorts of images. But the yellow boarder doesn't do anything for me. Also, would a square crop work a little better? Gary
I agree with Gary, a square crop would be a improvement, look at your image and it has a lot of negative space around it. The square crop will remove it and concentrate all the attention on the Sparrow Hawk, on the plus side the image shows the bird about to take flight, this shows movement and tells a story.
Thanks see your point its an old pic. I was washing dishes looked up there it was it was watching some doves [they got away] Kevin