Wash Day

Discussion in 'Critique' started by Roxi Tisha Lynn, Dec 22, 2021.

  1. Roxi Tisha Lynn

    Roxi Tisha Lynn New Member

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    I am now housebound for the holidays and am taking the time to work on composition and technique. As I usually spend my time out this is a new and confining situation. I am working with what I have on hand, lol, and enjoying processing time. Looking for honest critique.
     
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  2. Craig Sherriff

    Craig Sherriff Well-Known Member Site Supporter

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    Nicely laid out roxi, the main thing is it tells a story, also I have a heap of woolen soxes that need washing, do you mind if I send them over to you.
     
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    I really like this image. I like the subject, I like the way you have laid out the subject matter. I like the dark areas as well.

    If I was going to change one thing, and I am being really picky here, I would have given the subject a little more space along the bottom under the towel.

    Other than that, well done.

    Gary
     
  4. Old Film Bloke

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    the Highlights on the Towel are a but 'Burnt Out' and there is a slight Magenta Colour Cast -- add a bit of Green
     
  5. wagonwheel

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    I like this image, I keep coming back to it, probably because of it's simplicity. For critique: The white specks in the dark parts are distracting, my eye keeps going to them. It seems as though the washtub is not level, it may just be my old eyes. Perhaps a little more space at the bottom with some water spilled on the floor might work, especially if you could get a reflection? Thank you for sharing.
     

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